![]() I get that this is a fantasy story, and I get that it requires a healthy dose of imagination but the way the writer strings the scenes together doesn't work for my logical brain, I need scene structure that explains how we got from this to that, not a world full of one then suddenly another with no clear discription of what this "another" is. By "this" and "that" I mean the way the story just jumps into the next scene with no clear structure and no clear understanding of what led the characters into that scene. ![]() ![]() ![]() What started as a pretty cool story with awesome word play, right up my alley, quickly descended into a fantastic mess of this then that. ![]()
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